Thursday, May 17, 2012
The Going Rate for a Soul
This is the story of a story. Around six years ago I wrote a little horror story about a serial killer in the Dexter mode. A neat trick, considering I’d never seen or heard of Dexter at the time. I’m not even sure it was on when I wrote my story. Anyhoo, I sent it out to the few mystery/horror mags on the market that would take a story over 5000 words. No bites. One mag held it for a year and a half before regretfully sending it back. Finally I saw a call for an anthology about serial killers, and my story fell within the word parameters. I sent it in and success! They took it! I can’t say “they bought it” because this market was pay on publication. Publication was estimated at about a year away.
The year came and went. I did a few spot changes at the editor’s request. The editor mentioned Dexter. I explained how I’d never seen Dexter when I wrote the story. My character and Dexter’s similar outlook on life, and killing, was just one of those weird coincidences.
Then, with only a couple of months to go until publication (and payment) we authors got an email: the publisher was having financial troubles and had cancelled all planned anthologies. We were back at square one.
The editor promised to look for another publisher and gave us the option of pulling out or staying in. I opted to stay in. What the hell, I’d waited this long, and the market clearly wasn’t clamoring for another Dexter, even an inadvertent one. At some point I was bound to get a check.
Success again! The editor found a new publisher. Back to the waiting.
Then yesterday we got another email. The anthology was good to go. The publisher—not the editor, mind; this was the publisher—just had a couple of changes. We just had to check over our stories, agree to the changes or discuss them with the new publisher/editor, and we’d be looking at publication around September/October.
So I opened the file to check on what changes the publisher wanted to see.
Jesus God.
I think our “publisher” is a frustrated editor/writer. He hadn’t made suggestions. He’d cut some sentences, added others, moved whole paragraphs around. He wanted me to make changes and additions that, if implemented, would effectively change my protagonist’s personality and probably the thrust of the story.
The publisher, by the way, also mentioned Dexter. Are you starting to see a pattern here?
After my initial skim-through, and somewhat in shock, I decided to let the file sit overnight and sleep on my emotions. I’ll take another look at the changes sometime today with a fresh eye and a calmer brain. If it turns out my first impression was right and the guy is indeed trying to rewrite my story, I think I’ll go with my initial gut reaction and pull the story from the anthology.
Have I mentioned payment yet? Here ’tis: they’re offering one cent a word. Since nothing has ever been said about splitting royalties between contributing authors, I can only assume that one cent a word and a contributor’s copy are all we’re going to see. For my 8000+ word story, which they’ve now been holding for over two years and want me to revise into something else, I might see about $80. After publication.
Welcome to the world of a working writer.
The more I think about this, the more pissed off I get. I may just pull the story after all and make it, in its original non-Dexter form, my first foray into self-publishing. I may earn less than $80, but it’ll still be my story. The returns are liable to come in a lot faster than they have through these “traditional” publishers, and I won’t have to deal with a publisher who wants to be my co-author. I’m long past the point where I’ll put up with anything in order to see my words in print. I’ve seen my work in print for several decades now, and at way more than one cent a word.
Then there’s the other story I wrote as work for hire for a start-up fantasy publisher. I was promised a flat fee of $300 for a 5000-6000 word story—half on approval of plot, half on approval of story. I sent in half a dozen plots and finally got one approved. Got my $150. I wrote the story and sent it in by the agreed-upon deadline. The editor said he’d get back to me in a couple of weeks. That was October. No sign of the story, the editor’s opinion, or my other $150. Thank God I’m not trying to make a living at this.
And these are just short stories. I shudder to think what must go into selling a novel.
Self-publishing is looking better and better, boy I tell you what.
On a better note, yesterday I subbed a M/M romance novella to Siren. Their editors are skilled, professional and easy to work with. Responses are swift, within two weeks. So’s production time. Once a book’s accepted, you can count on seeing it for sale on the site within six months or less. Royalties are paid on time. Editors might make suggestions and request expansion or clarification of scenes or characters, but to date not one has actively moved or rewritten whole sections of story, or tried to get me to change my character so it’s more like a show on cable. Guess who I’ll be writing more stories for in the weeks to come.
If I had the whole thing to do over, I’d have taken art and illustration in college and gone into comics like I always wanted. Wait, we can self-publish comics on the Internet too. I’m starting to like the future more and more.
Monday, July 21, 2008
Bite-Sized Fiction!
I’m delighted that My Weekly also loved the story and bought it. Not only is this satisfying in itself, I’ve realised what a useful promotional tool short stories can be. This magazine allows the author to include a short bio with the story, which gives the opportunity to mention published novels and include a website address. Imagine what great advertising this is: hundreds of thousands of people could potentially read the short story, and at the end, they will see the title of a book written by the same author. At least a few of them are likely to look it up on the Internet.
Short stories also provide the ideal format to try different techniques. I’ve often thought of writing a book in first person, but not wanted to risk all the time and effort involved in writing a long novel in first person, only to discover it doesn’t work for me. But I’m quite happy to take an hour or two to write one or two thousand words in first person, or present tense, to see how it sounds.
Some of the magazines also encourage trying unusual techniques, such as all dialogue. The short form is the ideal place to try all those techniques you’d like to try but never get around to. It’s also so much fun! I have many ideas swimming around inside my head and instead of having to finish 80,000 words or more before I can start a new story, I can write a new one every day if each is only a few thousand words.
Try bite-sized fiction. It’s instant gratification for writers.
Thursday, June 5, 2008
What's a Chessie?
The 7th anniversary issue of Aoife's Kiss is out! Everyone should go buy a copy. Not only because my short story, Dead Chessie, is in it. Not because the editor, Tyree Campbell, was awesome enough to be the very first person to take a chance on Anna Martin. (He was also nice to me when I turned into Idiot Girl at Hypericon last year as soon as I realized who I was standing next to in the dealer room.) Not even because the cover art is really spiffy. (Dan Skinner's "Pirate Scout" has earned him a new fangirl!) But because the Sam's Dot people are incredibly cool all the way around. In addition to Aoife's Kiss, Sam's Dot offers up all sorts of nifty things like SpecFic poetry, a special online zine for kids, a zine for fans of sensual sf/f, even an anthology of tentacle stories. They work really hard to bring their writers' voices to the world and that has made them one of the best independent publishers out there. I am very proud to be one of those writers. Go check 'em out!
And the story? If you followed ATIV, then you're already familiar with Dead Chessie's main character, Bard Anna Martin. She's stationed on Maryland's Eastern Shore, investigating the corpse of a big dead snake that, according to the overeager were-golden retriever on the police force, is more than it seems. The clues Anna uncovers reveals the consequences of a peer's bad decisions and the truth about a local legend.
I have to admit, I'm pretty geeked out. Chessie was my first sale, and finally seeing something I wrote in print realizes a big dream for me. Now all I have to worry about is the potential for angry Marylanders when they realize I killed off a Chesapeake myth.
